雅思写作考试之语言灭绝范文分析？
雅思写作阅卷考官都是受过严格训练的，所以考生们在作答过程中一定要注意词汇的运用以及语句的连贯与衔接，希望通过老师的分享，烤鸭们能够通过范文的阅读和学习能够掌握一些写作以及表达的技巧，巧妙地运用到自身的雅思写作备考当中，争取在雅思考试中取得理想的写作高分。
Why are a variety of languages and cultures disappearing nowadays?
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Introduction:(42 words)
Now the chance of experiencing different lifestyles or imitating to speak a few words of other languages for fun is slim due to the disappearance of some cultures and languages.I think that superstitious cultures and languages behind modern times cannot survive(thesis statement).
Body1(112words)
Once I visited Se ethnic minorities village,located on a hillside in south of China.To my disappointment,I did not feel a different thing about ethnic clothes,food or music.Ridiculously,an old villager said that the forefather of his race had been an embodiment of a fairy with a dog head and a human body!The old generations have been proud of being the descendants of the fairy;however,Generation Y may feel ashamed of that because they know exactly this is a superstitious myth and to be a dog's descendants is not a glorious thing.Apparently,the cultures basing on superstitious belief would be torn down by social progress(topic sentence).
Body2(121words)
Further more,a language without written methods may be replaced by advanced one(topic sentence).There are many parts of the world where people cannot write because they do not have their own written language.The only way they can preserve their history is to recount it as sagas handed down from one generation of storytellers to another.With the fast pace of globalization,international aid can be put forward to reach every corner of the world.Those underdeveloped or isolated areas could receive food,medicine and education.The advanced civilization has pervaded into those primitive cultures hence they have started to learn writing something by the means of the available language accompanied with aid.Therefore their original one would have disappeared.
Conclusion(34words)
In conclusion,the disappearance of some cultures or languages is not worth preventing.This is an unavoidable outcome of the global economic growth.Most importantly,people can enjoy more prosperity and social progress.
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